Blll
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Post by Blll on Nov 11, 2006 21:55:37 GMT -5
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Post by JoJo on Nov 11, 2006 22:20:22 GMT -5
Very nice, like the editing. Shows a lot of potential. May I offer a suggestion: In the scene where the camera pans through the cemetery, (after showing the entrance to Strawberry Fields) You stop short of showing the gravestone there, rather you cut straight to the Yellow Sub gravestone. How about showing the stone as shown here: www.jojoplace.org/Shoebox/Rigbystills/Rigby1.jpgand then fading to this one, with the left handed guitar player: www.jojoplace.org/Shoebox/Rigbystills/Rigby2.jpg |
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Post by tkp66 on Nov 11, 2006 23:19:22 GMT -5
I like it, but it is a bit too fast.
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Post by lili on Nov 18, 2006 13:25:12 GMT -5
I tried responding under you-tube. It won't let me ! Now I'm frustrated !   |
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